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Post by magpie on Dec 10, 2007 16:22:35 GMT -5
"Might" get in the way? Might? You better un-might that might...lol.
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Post by .:*:Becka:*:. on Dec 10, 2007 16:39:52 GMT -5
hehehehehehe ^^^^^^ :-)
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Post by Ellie on Dec 11, 2007 20:58:40 GMT -5
Okay, chapter 22 has been posted, and I just feel like I *have* to say... I had so much FRICKIN' FUN!! writing this chapter!! I enjoy writing the gang when they're acting ornery, and this is them at their orneriest yet, believe me!! I hope you enjoy the Covenant at Nicky's, I know I did ;D ;D
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Post by magpie on Dec 12, 2007 16:54:19 GMT -5
Well, I really liked this chapter...I love how Amelia's feisty character is coming more and more to the foreground. Ahh,I positively swooned when Pogue became all caring and called Anny "My Anna, Our Anna", such a sweet scene. Pffft, reid and his snarky comments. I absolutely adore Tyler and the way you are making his character grow. Good on ya!
Now you will notice that this review will be short, i am ending it with one line..."Keep Caleb and his little green everythings away from Amelia." That boy is sweet but I dont trust that steely resolve in the Danver's bloodline....trouble this way comes, i am sure of it. Ay yai yai!
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Post by Ellie on Dec 12, 2007 20:36:26 GMT -5
Woo-hoo, another post from Mags!! Amelia is feeling good and showing it! The "flashing action" scene may seem totally random, and it is a *little*, but it was something Amelia did in the game my husband and I played, only she actually *flashed* the guy...bare breasts and all. Of course, I couldn't see this version of Amelia going that far, but it was such a fun scene that I *had* to sneak it into the fiction somewhere, and this just seemed too perfect Tyler is definitely becoming the wise man of the group, Reid is still...well, Reid, Pogue is taking his role at Amelia's side very seriously, and how Caleb will fit into this is anyone's guess. "Dark Horse" seems like a bit of an understatement, but I have several pages of the next chapter written already and you should be happy with what you read, Mags
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Post by magpie on Dec 13, 2007 7:34:09 GMT -5
Well a happy Mags is a contented Mags is a fangirl Mags.
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Post by Ellie on Dec 13, 2007 7:51:47 GMT -5
...makes for a happy writer!
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Post by Ellie on Dec 13, 2007 10:17:13 GMT -5
This is just a note to draw your attention to the new thread I posted in the "Help Wanted" section of the message board...I need your help with art for "Legacy"!! Click the link below to go straight to the thread: Any questions, just ask!!!!
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Post by magpie on Dec 14, 2007 17:37:03 GMT -5
bump...as on update...as in i need update...as in withdrawal...Help!!!
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Post by Ellie on Dec 14, 2007 20:31:17 GMT -5
Well, I *do* have another chapter completed and proofread...I just started working on the following chapter and thought about waiting for it to be done and post both at the same time, but if you really, *really* want it now... *poof! as a new chapter magically appears*
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Post by magpie on Dec 17, 2007 10:03:00 GMT -5
All hail Ellie.
Well I have to say this chapter just about made me die from cuteness. Loved Pogue's proposal and Amelia's answer to that particular question. So they are keeping it a secret...sheesh,cant wait for that bit of news to reach the Covenant.
Pogue pretty much voiced my own opinions regarding Tyler and Reid, he's not worried about them as threats, he is more worried about Caleb as well he should be.
Caleb is emotionally unstable when it comes to Amelia and its this that will probably make him Staughtons prime target as was illustrated by your closing paragraph,Im worried,very very worried because honestly what are the odds of this whole thing running smoothly...pffft,not likely I say...(-:
Love it love it love it love it.
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Post by Ellie on Dec 17, 2007 10:25:52 GMT -5
And I loved writing it!! Pogue, Mr. Spontaneity And it was only a matter of time until Anna found a way to meet her daddy. As for Caleb, he'll be coming to the forefront more so in the upcoming chapters. He has to come to terms with what he feels for Amelia and what he carries on his shoulders as being the 'leader of the pack'. It's a tough burden to bare. I just posted the next chapter. There are fireworks and emotions galore. It was a heavy one to write, but important nonetheless. Brace yourself! On another note, I'm working on creating the site for the fanfic...any ideas of what I should include on it other than the fic itself, if anything??
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Post by magpie on Dec 18, 2007 4:05:11 GMT -5
Okay that was one hell of a chapter my only concern...Why didnt Amelia tell Pogue.( Says mags as she rips out her hair in frustraion.)
Caleb is a smooth operator,I gotta give him that. Now something Ive noticed about Pogue,even though he hasnt ascended he seems more powerful almost, as if something is changing in him. Is this just my overactive imagination or is there actually something to it?
Loved how you wrote Tyler in this chapter,he was a highlight, BabyBoy sure is growing up fast and Reid is just as funny as ever but with the sliver of maturity that is surrounding him....nice.
Oh Pogue,how I love his pacing and worrying and kisses and caring and and and and....
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Post by Ellie on Dec 18, 2007 8:30:11 GMT -5
Don't worry, Mags, all will be revealed soon! Amelia is trying to figure out the best way to tell Pogue and that will happen soon enough. One of Pogue's focuses for his Powers is his passion, so when he gets angry and threatens to use his abilities it can create an electrical sensation in the immediate area...same as with the other guys when they're not harnessing it. Pogue was too wrapped up in what he was hearing to harness it Good thing he wasn't in public! Tyler was by far my favorite in this chapter, as well. His frustrations with Reid, along with his inner turmoil over Amelia, finally made him snap. Who knew he would be the one to put Reid in his place? LoL I'm *almost* halfway done with the latest chapter, but I'm working on the fanfic site for the story currently so I haven't had a chance to work on the chapter for a couple days. I'll keep you posted!!!
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Post by Ellie on Dec 18, 2007 9:54:50 GMT -5
Legacy...Fate...Destiny is finally complete! More sections will be added later, but the essentials of the site are *done* Here it is: www.passionedsoul.com/legacyI think what I'll do is just- from now on- posting when a new chapter has been completed and then direct people to the site to read it. It's just so much prettier on the site Does this sound okay with you guys? I don't want anyone to be put out that I'm not posting the direct links to the chapters on the thread anymore...please give me feedback!!!
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