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Post by Ellie on Nov 27, 2007 19:21:41 GMT -5
'The Legacy' Characters Here are the characters that have been introduced in 'The Legacy'. Obviously, a few are already familiar. More will be added to this section as they're introduced. Enjoy!
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Maggie
Junior Member
"You Don't Force Excellence; It's Just Something That Comes..."-Taylor Kitsch
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Post by Maggie on Nov 27, 2007 20:47:06 GMT -5
ONE WORD:
PERFECT!! = ]]
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Post by Ellie on Nov 27, 2007 20:57:46 GMT -5
So glad you like them!!! I agree with the one for Justus- definitely!, Little William I'm a little more "eh" about, but still glad you likes
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Post by magpie on Nov 28, 2007 6:59:39 GMT -5
Chapter 18...
Okay thank you very much for writing that scene between Pogue and Amelia's dad, you can see from Pogues side there is nothing but love that he feels for Amelia and the fact that he said he(the dad) should rather ask Amelia how she feels is actually quite indicative about the conflictions between every one in the group, as if subconsciously POgue isnt really all that sure about the strength of Amelia's feelings for him. That said, it was awesomely written.
Well ,my heart just broke for Pogue in this chapter, he was soooo happy when Amelia told him the news only for him to come back down to earth...hard. i really wished Amelia told and explained everything to Pogue before she told the rest of the boys. I mean I am happy for their impending fatherhood but damnit, Pogue seemes so hurt and angry...I keep wondering what will happen next and how on earth will Amelia's parents react...though,I suspect the fatehr might know more about Amleia's gifts and future than he lets on but still explaining to your dad you got pregnant by 4 different guys...well, rather her than me.
I loved how you made it clear that it was Anna, Pogues daughter that would be "something else" as she mentioned to Tyler. It makes me hopeful that Anna and Pogue will sort everything out. Pogue is a very intense character so it wont be easy for him to get past teh "betrayal" as he sees Caleb's actions and Amelia's thoughts/dreams when she thought it was Reid she was reaching out to. Would that be enough for Pogue to question everything they shared up until that point,making him feel that he simply got her because he got to her first...I really hope you dedicate some substantial paragraphs to that particular conversation between the two of them.
Sheesh,I cant wait for teh next chapter,really really cant wait.
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Post by .:*:Becka:*:. on Nov 28, 2007 13:53:40 GMT -5
so one thing did Pogue use protection whilst him and Amelia had their fling??? oh nooo!!! lol hehehehehehe
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Post by Ellie on Nov 28, 2007 18:02:59 GMT -5
Yeah...nix on the protection thing. Pogue only had one thing on him that wasn't his scabbard and play sword...his cell phone. Oops! I guess he must not have planned on getting it on with a wench that night after all
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Post by Ellie on Nov 30, 2007 16:31:37 GMT -5
Just to let you know...all images of the characters in the story have been moved to one section w/i the thread. As characters are introduced, it will be added to and I'll put up a post when a new one is added. Follow the link below to see all of the chars...and no, there is no pic yet for Stoughton cause I cannot find one that works for him quite yet!!!
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Post by magpie on Nov 30, 2007 18:09:42 GMT -5
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Post by Ellie on Nov 30, 2007 19:28:22 GMT -5
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Post by Ellie on Dec 4, 2007 7:42:03 GMT -5
Wow, where did everybody go??!! Chapter 20 has been posted for-hopefully- more of your reading pleasure! This chapter is for Magpie, Becky & Ondra- back to more classic scenes just for you girls 'cause I miss seeing you here! LoL *whimpers* I feel itchy all over being the only one posting to my own thread as of late. Where did all of my girls go??
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Post by Ondra on Dec 4, 2007 23:38:37 GMT -5
I'm so behind it isn't even funny. I think I have close to 180 computer pages of text in 10 pt. font. I hope I can get around to just sitting and reading after classes end (which is in next Wednesday (12/12)! WOOHOO!). But until said time, I am literally swamped with projects, papers, paper revisions, and having to study for upcoming exams.
I promise I have not given up on the story Ellie, I am just psychotically behind and I haven't wanted to read the posts because I don't know if there are any spoilers within and I don't think I should post until I catch up at least a little. : (
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Post by Ellie on Dec 5, 2007 8:13:06 GMT -5
I'm so behind it isn't even funny. I think I have close to 180 computer pages of text in 10 pt. font. I hope I can get around to just sitting and reading after classes end (which is in next Wednesday (12/12)! WOOHOO!). But until said time, I am literally swamped with projects, papers, paper revisions, and having to study for upcoming exams. I promise I have not given up on the story Ellie, I am just psychotically behind and I haven't wanted to read the posts because I don't know if there are any spoilers within and I don't think I should post until I catch up at least a little. : ( Yeah, spoilers galore here!! Have fun reading Can't wait to hear back from you, Ondra!!
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Post by .:*:Becka:*:. on Dec 5, 2007 17:29:42 GMT -5
sorry sorry here i am its just school finals and presentations have been killing me i promise ill try and be on more often as i used to... im on chapters 17 and 18 that i have just copied yeah i know im far behind sorry ill get caught up on my reading... thanks ellie love u lots and keep up the fantastic work.... :-)
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Post by magpie on Dec 9, 2007 4:15:21 GMT -5
Review Chapter 20...
Well, I like that Amelia's parents are finally getting a sense of normalcy back into their lives,how long that will last with the whole "pregnant" thing...well that is anyone's guess.
Loved the little looks Mr. Strong and Mrs. Strong threw Pogues way,,,poor guy. Congrats of keeping a consistant "between the lines" mention of Amelia and Pogues relationship and how it does differ from the ones she has with the other boys.
I laughed out loud when I read Reid's reaction to Amelia's mom, though he should watch his mouth, i have a feeling that as the pregnancy progresses, that primal part of Pogues protective nature will get way more protective and he might start getting really irritated by Reid's innuendos. So yeah, that will be fun to read.
I still dont think Staughton will let them live in peace as I think he is the one influencing Kate....feeding of her anger at Amelia's betrayal.
Funniest line belonged to Mr. Strong about a motorcycle...somehow i just saw that as a FastForward scene of Amelia and Pogue 20 years from now when Anna starts dating or something.
Reid is actually completely of my threat list at the moment, Tyler knows where Amelia's heart lies and so does Caleb to an extent but Caleb is the dark horse, he is such an intense person, add to the fact his mother's encouragement and well...nothing good can come of it. I actually thought at a time that Staughton's best way of attact would be via Caleb's mother, Caleb really loves her and the idea that she is getting better...well, he might be very impressionable to anything she suggests, add to the fact that up until now he has been the strongest, the only one with two titles, the oldest, the one who first ascended, i mean the boy is human after all and Im sure his ego took a knock by Amelia choosing Pogue (his wingman for lack of a better term) over him, whetehr he admits it or not.
So sweet how Pogue crashed in Amelia's rooom and the breakfast in bed...I melted on the spot. His reaction to Reid's questioning glare...priceless!!!
Not liking the whole KAte situation one bit, she is going to make thing really tough for Amelia methinks, questioning her morality and then being pregnant, well its not going to look good.
What is the deal with the Provost, i think he has a bigger part to play in this than you are telling me, his relationship with Evelyn's mother, well...it seems odd to say the least. Cant wait to read further on that.
Super awesome chapter and I love how Pogue is trying to curb his language and the language of teh otehrs...such a proud papa bear.
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Post by Ellie on Dec 10, 2007 7:44:58 GMT -5
Yay! *claps hands* Mags is back!! I've so missed your reviews! I figured you'd be loving the Pogue/Amelia-ness so far- it feels very obvious to them that they belong together, but there's always that sliver of doubt that something could- and might- get in the way of things. They're back at Spenser now, which can only equal good old-fashioned "fun", lol! No idea when the next chapter will be up as I haven't started on it yet. Getting it going is half the battle, so wish me luck!! Thankies, as always, sweetie ;D
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