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Post by Ellie on Jan 18, 2008 9:46:36 GMT -5
Chapter 30 has been posted just in time for the weekend!! Some new Amelia artwork and 2 new character profiles have been added to the site, as well Well, Becky, get back on the ball and join the angst fest that's brewing at full steam!!! ;D
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Post by .:*:Becka:*:. on Jan 23, 2008 13:54:35 GMT -5
*DIDO*...
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Post by Ellie on Jan 28, 2008 20:30:13 GMT -5
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Post by .:*:Becka:*:. on Jan 29, 2008 15:17:52 GMT -5
awesome Ellie... thx :-)
Keep up the Marvelous work...
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Post by Ellie on Jan 29, 2008 18:33:04 GMT -5
I'm trying, thanks Becky
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Post by magpie on Jan 29, 2008 18:44:12 GMT -5
Okay so for chapter 31 I'll be giving blow by blow commentary as I read the chapter so if you font want to be spoiled...HERE BE SPOILERS!!!!
Holy crap Pogues dad knows how to command an audience...like father like son I guess. Loved Sam's distraction techniques as she ushered the Strongs to the otehr room. Classically written.
I see so much of Pogue in his dad when he talked about James and his abandonement, that can so easily happen to Pogue and Caleb...poor boys.
Heehee..."WHo are you"..."He's fiance". Loved that moment, Amelia asserted herself and reaffirmed her relationship with Pogue in one sentance...go go Amelia.
What's the vibe Im getting from Wayne and Evelyn...they spar to easily with words trying to cut deep and to keep the other one in control...any history there miss novelist?
Amelia's panic attack whilst Wayne is leaving...must mean something very bad is happening to Pogue at tha tvery moment...dangit lady,you write a mean story.
"Dyin...dying...dying...!" Crap,You realise that if I hadnt quit smoking id be lighting up like crazy right about now.
“If I recall right, talking is a lot more fun if you’re drunk while doing it. Or maybe I’m thinking about sex.” Someone needs to get that on a bumper sticker pronto.
Wow,Amelia's mum really does deserve a meadal for calmest person ever.
Okay,now Im stressed out...they are at teh shed,...Be careful boys...please.
“Yeah, well…I might be rusty, but it’s like riding a virgin. You never really forget how.” Heeehee.
Okay reading teh extent of his injuries...you have me cringeing with sympathy pains.
Go CAleb...I know you can save him.
You have writeen these scenes sooooooo well.
Dang,Pogues dad kicks the bucket? Well you did say a member of teh Cov,I guess you just didnt mention which one...Im right up until "his eyes glassy"
And there you go,leaving me with a cliff hanger...damnit,Im not going to have nails or hair left at this rate.
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Post by Ellie on Jan 30, 2008 7:28:45 GMT -5
Oh, Mags, I must say I laughed my butt off reading that. Your reviews/commentaries are half the fun I have in writing the chapters!!! Such a nice reward!! ;D Thank you!
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Post by jennajooh on Jan 30, 2008 20:36:57 GMT -5
So Wayne is pretty much the best freaking character ever...especially for a dad. are you sure he's not Reid's dad? lol yaay pogues alive!! i'm right there with Mags...no nails or hair left. dang it! now i have to go and search for something else to bite/rip apart in nervous anticipation
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Post by Ellie on Jan 31, 2008 15:14:17 GMT -5
Oh my gosh, Jenna, I'm sorry I killed off your favorite character!! Geez...now I feel more pangs of regret, lol. The next chapter will be subdued where action is concerned. It's mostly aftermath stuff. It's gotta happen after all of *that*.
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Post by magpie on Jan 31, 2008 15:45:47 GMT -5
Ellie..I'll be sending you my hair-care bill m'kay....lol
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Post by .:*:Becka:*:. on Jan 31, 2008 17:15:01 GMT -5
just wear a wig for a while until it starts growing back... lol Ah, I like the M'kay comment... hehe ;-)
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Post by Ellie on Jan 31, 2008 20:45:54 GMT -5
Wow! I'm the cause of hair and nail loss...I never knew I had that in me ;D
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Post by Ellie on Feb 4, 2008 7:38:23 GMT -5
Chapter 32 is done and up at the site!!! It's time to deal with the aftermath... I've also added a poll at the bottom of the chapter for people to rate it. I'm going to add those to each chapter, so I look forward to seeing what people think of each section!!! www.passionedsoul.com/legacy
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Post by .:*:Becka:*:. on Feb 4, 2008 13:09:29 GMT -5
Ellie..I'll be sending you my hair-care bill m'kay....lol
---> why go to a Salon or Barber when u can do it urself... lol Yank it out! I hear that its the new fad... so thats what i hear in here anyways... LOL
Okie Dokie... sounds like a plan Ellie!!! :-) Ill rate it A++++++++++++++++
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Post by jennajooh on Feb 5, 2008 21:08:41 GMT -5
*squees with delight* Pogue!!!!! my hair has successfully reached a nice peach fuzz look. i'm admiring the shape of my head lately
i have to agree with Becky, this story should be advertised as a great read and the easy way to get a haircut!
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