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Post by Ondra on Oct 21, 2007 19:44:11 GMT -5
Hey, I think that's pretty good. I'm really lookoing forward to the next update.
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Post by Ellie on Oct 21, 2007 21:03:27 GMT -5
Thanks, we'll see how it goes. I'm already kinda deviating from the storyline of our game a bit. I added Chapter 2 (which I wrote in 2 1/2 hours) tonight
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Post by .:*:Becka:*:. on Oct 22, 2007 15:47:33 GMT -5
ill read those as soon as i get some xtra time... sounds all very interesting...
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Post by Ondra on Oct 27, 2007 22:57:26 GMT -5
The story's great so far. I'm really enjoying reading it. Can't wait for the next update!
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Post by .:*:Becka:*:. on Oct 29, 2007 16:35:42 GMT -5
hey that was a good story i really liked it... so cute how the guys all have a crush on her and how caleb smiled a bit at the end when he said "welcome to Ipswich.... Amelia" oh so cute!!! cant wait to hear the rest...
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Post by Ellie on Oct 30, 2007 6:16:50 GMT -5
Okay...this will definitely be a longer novella than I had originally anticipated. I certainly wouldn't blame people for not reading a fanfic that was practically as long as a book!! Hehe...but thanks, gals, I'm glad you're liking so far. I have parts finished that aren't up yet so I will post them soon
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Post by magpie on Oct 30, 2007 9:03:27 GMT -5
LOVE IT!!!!!
I havetn had time for reading fics in a bit but procrastination made me do it and its amazing, you dont fall into the trap most fic writers make when writing a fic, you keep in charater but you DONT keep your characters in movieverse stasis if that makes any sense, nothing is predictable to the extent that I feel Im reading a MAry Sue, thats why I went off of fics of late, too many of the same storylines and character sketches are surfacing everywhere but this, this is really like.
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Post by .:*:Becka:*:. on Oct 30, 2007 15:38:38 GMT -5
^ mag sounds like u were tired when u typed it or like u were in a hurry hehe sounds cute, and yeah ur post sorta makes sense hehe i think u were just excited to read it and u were finger happy, HA its cool i get finger happy too sometimes lol
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Post by stevensfan on Oct 30, 2007 16:50:09 GMT -5
I love it, it sounds good. I still need to work on mine and put it up soon. School has been so busy for me
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Post by Ondra on Oct 30, 2007 20:19:32 GMT -5
I get it Mag...I love the story and am trying to wait patiently for the updates!
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Post by michela on Oct 30, 2007 21:35:37 GMT -5
I love the Fic so far great job. I can't wait for more
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Post by .:*:Becka:*:. on Oct 31, 2007 14:26:46 GMT -5
... oh isnt Ellie just wonderful? she made my dream come true, i feel like a little girl at Disney World for the first time... lol Woopeee!!! "All ur dreams come true in StevenLand"!!! haha for some reason that reminded me of "Dumb and Dumber" "I desperately want to make love to a school boy" (Jim Carrey) lol gotta love him lol i dno it just hit me so i thot i would share my thots with u guys, i dno why my head seems to trail off sometimes lol "one thing leads to another" i guess hehe
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Post by Ondra on Oct 31, 2007 21:33:26 GMT -5
Very nice quote at the end there Becky, and a big Yeah for Ellie for getting a new chapter up!
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Post by .:*:Becka:*:. on Nov 1, 2007 13:51:10 GMT -5
thanks im glad u liked it! hehe
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Post by magpie on Nov 1, 2007 17:25:47 GMT -5
Nice chapter Ellie, you are making it tough to choose. At first I was absolutely possitive about Caleb and Amelia being perfect for each other, they both have that quiet intensity that would make them so rad together but then there is Pogue who, lets faace it is much more raw and edgy in his emotions which would make for some pretty hot scenes...who is it going to be?
As you might have noticed I am not shipping either Reid or Tyler with Amelia mostly cus Reid isnt a one woman guy and Tyler is such a sweetheart and I see him more as a big borhter. But its your story so I'll read wherever you lead captain.
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