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Post by Trista on Aug 28, 2007 2:38:04 GMT -5
Can I edit all that into paragraphs and dialogue? I'd send it back to you in a PM, it's just difficult to read like that. Or you can do it, it doesn't really matter, I'm just trying to help out a bit.
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Post by stevensfan on Aug 28, 2007 2:43:27 GMT -5
sure you can help out i was just going by what comes out of my head. But yea it's always good to have a helping hand
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Post by Ondra on Aug 29, 2007 0:50:46 GMT -5
NIce plot line.
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Post by stevensfan on Aug 29, 2007 3:27:11 GMT -5
The Covenant 2: A Family Bloodline discovered by: Stevensfan (melissa) edited by: Sad *thanks a bunch* =)
Two years after the battle with Chase Collins, Caleb Danvers who is now a Sophmore in College at University of Ipswitch, starts to have flashbacks of the battle. He still has one question from that night on his mind, "What ever happened to Chase after the battle?" He is still thinking about the fireman searching the burned down Putnum barn and not finding any ashes nor body of Chase. Caleb starts to worry.
While trying to study for his American History test, he gets a knock at his dorm door. He opens his door,"Yo Caleb, what's up?" His friend Michael that he met in his first year of college comes inside with a box of pizza.
Caleb answers, "hey....."
Michael looks around and finds Caleb's books on the table where Caleb was sitting at. "Man you got to stop studying for a while and PARTAY!"
Caleb looks at him, "No, I don't need to PARTAY."
Michael looks at Caleb like if something was wrong with him. Michael answers back, "Alright, geesh what has gotten into your pantaloons?"
Caleb sits down and says, "Nothing, don't worry about it".
Michael chops down on the Hawaiian pizza. With his mouth full, "Do want some?"
Caleb looks at him disgusted, "Have you ever heard of the word, don't talk with your mouth full?!"
Michael swallows his pizza and says, "Yes, daddy!" Caleb takes his notebook and hits Michael in the head. "OW, DUDE!" Caleb laughs, and spots his prom picture with him and Sarah. "Where is Sarah now, dude?" Michael replies looking at Caleb.
Caleb smirks, "She's at Stanford now."
Michael pats Caleb in the back and tells him, "You'll find another girl just like her, you'll see." Michael just remembers something then, "Hey Caleb, did you hear?"
Caleb looks at him, "No, what?"
Michael starts telling the story that someone is rebuilding the Putnam Barn.
Caleb's eyes become big and surprise, "What?!"
Michael looks at him, "Yea dude, I'm serious. There's a bunch of people rebuilding it right now." Caleb grabs his coat and keys. "Hey where you going dude?!" Michael yells out.
"I'm going to check out this rebuilding of the Putnam barn!" Caleb leaves and heads for his Silver Mustang 08.
Caleb burns out with his tires screeching, and drives toward the site where people are rebuilding The Putnam Barn. Going 90 mph he finally reaches his destination. Caleb recognizes three familar faces. "Hey Pogue, Tyler, Reid!" The three guys turned around and sees Caleb.
"Hey long time no see," Reid says. Caleb hugs Pogue, Reid, and Tyler not seeing them for almost 2 years.
"Can, you believe this..they're rebuilding the Putnam barn?" Pogue says in a disbelief look.
Caleb answers, "Yea, I can't believe it. Who would actually rebuild the barn?" While the guys are looking at the people working, two guy workers spot the three and start mumbling something under their breaths. After looking at Reid, Tyler, and Pogue, the men started staring more toward Caleb. Caleb spots the men that are looking at him and sees their eyes glow red. Caleb starts looking towards them.
"Hey!" Caleb jumps a little frightened, "Are you okay? I didn't mean to scare you," Reid replies.
Caleb looks at Reid, "Yea, don't do that!" The two men go back to work. Reid starts to look where Caleb is staring at. He doesn't see what Caleb is staring at and shrugs. Caleb looks at his watch "Oh crap, I got to get to class!" Caleb shake hands with his buddies.
"Hey, we got to meet up where we always used to meet up!" Reid, Tyler, Pogue, and Caleb smiles.
Caleb answers back, "Man, you got it!" Caleb drives off.
Running towards his class he bumps into a beautiful mixed Filipina, Spaniard, caucasian girl with brown hair down to her back, skin as white as snow, and beautiful grey eyes. She is dressed in jeans, and a pink tank top with a jean jacket. Caleb and the girl's books drop to the floor.
"Oh, I am so sorry." The girl and Caleb says at the same time. Both of them get down to the floor and pick up their books. They bump heads.
"Ouch... sorry I'll get that," the girl replies.
"No, I'll get it" Caleb answers back. They both pick up their books and look at each other. The girl smiles.
"Oh, sorry I didn't introduce myself, the names Natalia Serene Hernandez people call me Nat for short or just call me Serene."
Caleb looks at her and shakes her hand, "Uh, I'm Caleb Danvers."
"Nice to meet you Caleb." Both Caleb and Natalia smiled at each other. "Umm.. I better get to class, I don't want to miss anything," Natalia tells Caleb.
"Oh Yea, me too, I mean...I don't want to be late."
"Yea, Maybe i'll see you around again," she says looking back at Caleb.
Caleb starts to run towards his class. He walks inside and starts to look for a seat, the nearest seat is the front. Caleb starts to taking down notes from the board. The professor starts to lecture about the notes and he goes on and on. Finally, he mentions to the class that the notes on the board are based on what's going to be on the exam. The class starts to sigh.
As the class exits the classroom door, Caleb drops a piece of a page from a book. He looks and it doesn't even belong to him. He noticed that there is a piece of information on The Covenant history of the Ipswich bloodlines linking to another bloodline of a family in Spain. He sees there is a mixture of witchery and werewolves. He doesn't have any clue where this came from. He puts it in his pocket to do more research, then heads back towards his dorm room. He go towards his desk and sits down and starts doing research on the Spanish Bloodlines of Werewolves and Warlocks. He finds more than 1,000 articles on the Spanish family bloodlines. He starts to read information and starts to type in family last names linking to pieces of Witchery and Werewolves. He goes into the first site, but there not enough information. After an hour of searching he finally goes onto a site and finds a family tree linking to Witchery and Werewolves.
Caleb starts to read out loud. "Let's see... Salvador, Cortez, Hernandez links to a mixture of Witchery and also werewolves." He thinks to himself, "Where have I heard one of these last names?" Thunder starts to roar while he thinks. He can only think of one person. Caleb gasps when he realizes... Natalia??
((to be continued))
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Post by Ondra on Aug 29, 2007 10:13:53 GMT -5
Much better. I had a hard time reading it last night, but that could have been the fact that it was 2 in the morning that contribited to that
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Post by arashi on Aug 29, 2007 12:00:31 GMT -5
Much better. I was actually able to read it this time. Good story. Great idea. Cannot wait to see more. thank you for sharing a bit of your soul with us.
Live in honor.
Blessed be.
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Post by stevensfan on Aug 30, 2007 18:51:52 GMT -5
I'll have part two pretty soon up, right now i'm just putting it into story form that way it can be understand just like my first one
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Post by rosamoon27 on Sept 10, 2007 0:55:42 GMT -5
oh i love ocs they are cool i did not like Sarah at all and i dont konw why lol well i love your story and update soon
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Post by stevensfan on Sept 11, 2007 18:57:15 GMT -5
The new continuation should be up very soon still working on it =) It's good with a twist took me a week to figure it out. =) Up soon
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Post by .:*:Becka:*:. on Sept 12, 2007 12:22:09 GMT -5
yay finally a latina, i love it i love it oooooooo i cant wait to read the rest GREAT JOB!!!
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Post by stevensfan on Sept 18, 2007 20:26:49 GMT -5
alrighte gals here's the continuation of the chapter hope u like it!! Took me almost the whole month. The Covenant 2 A family Bloodlines" It may be a little short, despite the fact i only had 20 mins to type this: but it will continue on..
Caleb walks in the library. The first person he spots is none other than Natalia. She's studying and doing her Anatomy homework . By her is the book of her ancestors in Spain. Caleb glares at the book for just a minute, he needs the book that Natalia has to continue his research. He knows that must be the answer to the link between Ipswitch and Spain. Both bloodlines with mysterious powers that no one knows about and one family with a curse. He looks around to see if anyone else can get in his way. Caleb Starts walking towards Natalia's way. Natalia who's concentrating on her homework feels someone bump into her. The book drops on the floor,"oops" Caleb says appologizing to Natalia. Natalia looks up and sees Caleb smiling. She smiles back. "Do you know where you were going Mr. Danvers?" Caleb looks at her. "Did you know it was me the whole time?" Natalia replys quickly,"maybe, maybe not?" Caleb moves the book with his shoe but bumps into the table. Natalia heard the thump. Caleb picked it up on the floor, pretending he didn't know it was there. "Ah, I believe this is your book"? Caleb handing it back to her. Natalia looks at the book and says,"no, i just found it on the book shelves and decided to read it on my free time." "Why don't you go ahead and take it, you look more anxiously to read the book than me." Caleb looks down to the floor and he's saying in his head,"hahha..Caleb you are such an idiot, you could've just asked!" Natalia continues to write down her homework than looks up at Caleb. "Anyways, you didn't answer my question did you know where you were going?" ((be continued))
I have to head to Japanese class, hopefully when i get home i can continue this. => Much love girls..
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Post by rosamoon27 on Sept 19, 2007 0:42:31 GMT -5
aaww i like it lol. ple read my story lol it really good.
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Post by .:*:Becka:*:. on Sept 19, 2007 12:00:34 GMT -5
thats cute, please finish it and i cant wait to read the rest... and a Japanese class wow thats interesting, me so jealous i can only speak 3 languages and understand 1 but cant speak it and my sis speaks 5 languages... darn it i need a teacher to teach me all these languages!!!
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Post by .:*:Becka:*:. on Sept 19, 2007 12:02:58 GMT -5
so much im missing out in... goodness!!!
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Post by stevensfan on Sept 19, 2007 18:28:58 GMT -5
I will finish it i just have to go on my other computer and print out the rough draft and put it onto the story i just put up. I'm glad you gals like it so far. => Yah Japanese class is fun...I know Spanish, Japanese, tagalog, english.
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